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Wednesday, 29 February 2012

The new script

Opening.
Jasmine grabs Amelia's hand and they slowly make their way out the door. Down the road the conversation is dry and Jasmine trys to make conversation.

Jasmine- So hows your family?
(No responce.)
- id hate to think what your going through, i mean u were so close to your brother and for him to just...

(A tear falls from girls eye. Her friend notices and  stops, grabs her and holds her tight.)

Jasmine-Im so sorry, i really am but if u talk about it itll help...i think (notices her friend shaking)
Babe whats up??


She turns around to see girl looking up the road. Amelia sees a figure standing there watching them, scared she says "I think we should go this way" and decide to take a short cut. As they do they hear sounds of fast footsteps behind them which are getting quicker and quicker. They both run as the man speeds up and begins to run.
Amelia- Oh my god hes following us!
Jasmine- Who....(she looks behind her to see the masked man) oh my god....

FADE TO BLACK - "VICTIM" TITLE SCENE.

Scene 2.

The scene fades in and Amelia is sleeping. What happened before had been a reocurring dream. She wakes up and picks up her phone. She sends a message to jasmine saying "I had the same dream again and somehow i think its related to my brothers accident..wanna meet up later?"

With that she changes her clothes and leaves and as she does a figures is seen watching her.
Heartbeat should be played as soon as the figure is noticable to the audience to raise questions and to change the atmosphere.

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